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Old 03-22-04, 07:38 PM   #14
puertoricanelly
Rb's Teacher
 
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From: KILLAFORNIA
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da classic: once again ur shit was koo. the only thing ya need to work on is structure.
structure elevates your rhymes a lot

L I: umm ur rhymes were played and tired. work on makin your bars rhyme. for example:
Here we are its the newest member of L.I.'s victims....
My shits contagious, itll be leavin u sick son....
so just elevate your rhyming

so heres how i see it........

open: da classic
close: da classic
personals: da classic
metas: da classic
punches: da classic
multis: da classic

VOte goes to .......... Da classic
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