Rb's Teacher
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IP:
da classic: once again ur shit was koo. the only thing ya need to work on is structure.
structure elevates your rhymes a lot
L I: umm ur rhymes were played and tired. work on makin your bars rhyme. for example:
Here we are its the newest member of L.I.'s victims....
My shits contagious, itll be leavin u sick son....
so just elevate your rhyming
so heres how i see it........
open: da classic
close: da classic
personals: da classic
metas: da classic
punches: da classic
multis: da classic
VOte goes to .......... Da classic
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