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Old 03-22-04, 10:51 PM   #9
Daclassic
If thats what you thought
 
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limited : i like ya structure. i can see ya words clearly. understandable. flow was nice too jus need to up on metaphors

pp2: okay the opener was weak. a few of ya punchlines are played and common
flow was off a bit but the vocab was there

this was close but v/limited

please return the favor and vote in my battle daclassic vs L.I. its in the front pages of front lines check it out thankx
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