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Old 03-23-04, 02:35 PM   #12
DirtBoy69
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breakdown down for lab2jizzy:

sound quality:alittle fuzzy lower the vocal volume to match the beat better you drown it out 6/10

beat choice:what i heard of it sucked i'm not liking the beat at all and your lyrics weren't working with it too well either 5/10

delivery:good emotion level and shit was the same through the whole peice 6/10

flow:for the most part it sounded kinda off beat but not sure when i couldn't really hear the beat when you started spittin 4/10

punches:that mario line was the best by far not bad the verse was full of punches good job 7/10

overall:28/50 the sound quality was the big problem

breakdown for icebergslim:

sound quality:not great here everything was mixed really loud and got kinda fuzzy and shit cause of it 4/10

beat choice:not a bad beat worked well with your lyrics 7/10

delivery:alright nothing really to say 6/10

flown beat through the whole thing not bad 7/10

punches:nothing really bout played topics and you talked about yourself quite a bit 5/10

overall:29/50

vote--jizzy had better punches but slim's verse was just better in everything else so he gets my vote
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