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Old 03-23-04, 03:26 PM   #10
code-187
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ok not the best of battles, but ill brake it down
explicitot had good wordplay and a very well structured verse although his use of vocab wasnt great he had some personals and his punches arent too played

MW used alot of good vocab but appart from that his verse wasnt good, the flow was wack some of the punches were played and the others were just week and last of all his closer was not good at all.
try to be more creative and ryme more words and u will elevate

return tha fava, there getting slept on
VS rec-d
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940

VS impendance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116219

VS Touch of gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127
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