yo slim if u usin weak rhymes at least throw in some multies and go for some flow. and your finisher needs to be a punch not jus w/e that was. and definately dont admit to gettin beat, thats not a good way to go
E, good multies and opener good word play, that coffee line and anyone sayin that this guys so weak i only have to do this and dont have to do that is usaully gay fillers. this line nice. "This primate's got more monkey bars than a playground/"
not a good finisher real unoriginal but slim check how it actual ended the battle and was dissin on u a lil or at least showin some hate. your closer had was like sayin pumkins are orange, shits jus statin sumin, that aint what u do in a battle.
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get back at me wit some honest votes on my battles here. pleaze

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