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Old 03-23-04, 09:26 PM   #8
Rising Sun
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flow-both were pretty good
vocab-vango
wordplays-not much
metaphors-vango
structure-vango
content-dunno
both were not bad. vango edged it out by a little, but daclassic i aint hating. you just need to add wordplays and metaphors. make it easier to read! but ya both were not bad, and keep elevating
overall-vamgo: u sorta didnt make sense at times

v//vamgo
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