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Old 03-25-04, 03:55 PM   #12
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check Dis...

2-Time: 5/10
Your Verse Was Aight, No Real Punches or Personals, Multis and Metaphors You Lacked, and You Lacked Vocab. But KEep Elevating, Good Drop Pimpin.

Coo Coo Capone: 3/10
Hmm..You Have Da Right Mind Set, Just Put Your Vocab, Into A Better Flow, and Add Sum Mulits and Metaphors In Dat Ish...Your Ish Will Be Hot, Just Keep Elevating Kid.

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