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Old 03-25-04, 06:04 PM   #20
Krackmittens
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wow gambino this is actually one of your bets that i have seen nice punches
yo dog if you got any hot rhymes you better pull-it-quick......
cause most of it is like sewage pipes you both full-of-shit/
nice line a lil played but i liked none the less
strucre decent flow ok and punches nice
gambino 4/10

Putting em on a stretcher, and ripping his lines into basic standards
when Im driving him nuts like nascar sponsored by planters
it looked like you were just reaching for some multis and it wasnt working bad metaphors or lack there of structre needs fixing and you had no real punches
service--1/10

v-gambino

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