gb: ya punchlines i wasnt really feelin..but the flow was good. and i felt the anger u had in ya verse. jus need to work on vocab, lyrical content and some harder punchlines

enygma: you had better punchlines my favorite line was "By the time I read his rhymes I'll probably Go And Snore/
He's Broke And Poor, If not then what is he Owing For/(0-4)"
and the other one about the feet u know defeat lol
you got skills so keep it up
v/enygma

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