lil nae: okay. structure is okay but the flow was a little off. punchlines i jus wasnt feelin if there were any

L.I.: okay u did good u came way harder then your opponent. punchlines hit harder...in every aspect u one....plain and simple. i believe u got your first victory here keep up the good work...cuz the job is well done
v/L.I.

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