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Old 03-26-04, 03:12 AM   #14
Afterword
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yo war mong u had a hot verse so dont be down on yurself.
just needed a lil betta structure
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Why you call urself ‘emcee’ ur more like a bitch sniffing for asses to follow…
Don’t even know why you “spit” the homeboys tell me you good at the “swallow”…

just blaze althogh yo name lame like the kid said
yur flow is flames and these bars beat him alone
my rhymes heavy like Pun and they smash your face in/
yo whole squad is full of jerks, like masturbation/
lyrical lasceration that will slash a patient/
leave your face full of holes like the mask of Jason/
you wanna face shit?/ Blaze give you a face lift/
my rhymes whip ass like a fukin dominatrix/

gud shyt both of u!
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