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Old 03-27-04, 01:30 AM   #24
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yo black out maybe u should try audio
b/c u had sum big words in there that may sound good
but as far as reading em, thet look like a lot of nothin
i could hardley follow althogh i can c u got a lil skillz
"Spit lyrical ~SicknesS~ this MIC giuy cud go down on his bitch and wouldn’t spit shit but ~SyphiliS~//"

and like urone said mic wreckers personals, and punches, and vocab were basic. and basicly garbage
but it was enuf for(mic wrecker) to beat this guy(black out) who seems like he could have won with better structure
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