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Old 03-28-04, 05:45 PM   #20
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If thats what you thought
 
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dm: yes u came could of came a lot better. need to work on structure but the flow was aight. but punchlines....they were not hittin enough....like this one..i'll fuck that mentaly black boy like i was a tom brady. i dont get that one.....elevate

duke: great opener. i like that special k shyt. but some of your punches were lame. need work on that. structure was nice and flow was nice.

v/duke
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