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dm: yes u came could of came a lot better. need to work on structure but the flow was aight. but punchlines....they were not hittin enough....like this one..i'll fuck that mentaly black boy like i was a tom brady. i dont get that one.....elevate
duke: great opener. i like that special k shyt. but some of your punches were lame. need work on that. structure was nice and flow was nice.
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