[QUOTE=JiXi][]My first actual written that i could temp at recording as a song. Its not perfect because i wanted to finish it in one night. What do you think? Specificaly what will and wont work in an audio....Thanx....


Tempers flared, till the fire burned out

okay this is how i see it jixi, it's all good except for this line,because it'z so eminem that it waz pick right out his a**.this'z in his songs like a thousand times.don't get me wronge i love em, jus' you using his lines that'z botherin me.so plz stop it'z not right to use another mc's lines or rhyms.so come up wit your own.if yoy can't then get off the website it is called rapbattles.com

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so what chicks can rap too/
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