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...i'm da nicest...
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IP:
aight...accomplishment...here is what i have to say about ur verse
YO you get "curb stomped" fuck dis new kid on da "block" go play in "traffic"...I GUESS I SEE WHERE U WERE GOIN WITH THIS LINE,BUT IT WAS REALLY WEAK,N U DONT KNOW HOW TO SET UP WORDPLAY
trap lyrics shit, yo trapped while da back of ya head meatin my Classic's.../WOULD'VE BEEN GOOD IF U PUT SOME EXPLANATION FOR CLASSIC,I MEAN I FIGURED ITS KICKS BUT STILL
"Take me on headstrong" yo ass is dead-wrong cuz da pavement and ya face gonna meet head-on...
THIS WAS PROLLY UR BEST LINE,BUT STILL DIDNT BLOW ME AWAY
yo rhymes is shit ya ass was lead-on gotcha bleedin to death so you can get yo red-on.../RED ON? C'MON U STRUGGLIN MAN
shit you aint good at basketball just cuz you a "ball-handler" Blind spit bitch cuz i throw you yo head tell ya to catch it.../WTF? U LOST ME KID...U WERE JUST RAMBLIN ON...
yo bitch i'm spitten hotness you claimen yo best friend is a "mod" so you can make some "progress"... no offence dawg
yo crew is run by women she make ya ass a slave bitch, mr. clean you leavin me spotless.../MAN,THERE WAS SO MUCH SHIT U HAD ON HIM,U COULD'VE DONE SO MUCH WITH IT,BUT U JUST KILLED IT MAN,IT FUCKIN SUCKED...PROGRESS N SPOTLESS HARDLY EVEN RHYME..N BY THE TIME I READ THE SECOND PART I DIDNT EVEN KNOW WHAT U WERE TRYNA RHYME IT WITH...
wow this fag has had it bitch, only reason his gay ass joined this website cuz he heard a rapper was "Fabolous"...THIS SUCKED FUCKIN ASSHOLE...GOOD GOD
yo bitch ass couldn't touch my "pressence" if yo was "wrapped"-rgiht.../
just cuz ya dyke ass leader rockin a dildo yo claimen yo crew is strapped-tight.../
AIGHT,HERE U WERE TRYIN FOR SOME WORDPLAY,BUT IT SEEMS REALLY FORCED TO ME,LIKE U ARE TRYIN TOO HARD...
SOME ADVICE..USE MORE MULTIES,N DONT TRY SO HARD FOR PUNCHES,N DONT MAKE THEM TOO COMPLICATED...I WASNT TOO IMPRESSED
CLASSIC
im a reconstruct his lackadaisical<---- thought process SEEMS TO ME LIKE A DICTIONARY WORD
you gutless wonder weakling, you verbaly sucker speaking
DIDNT MAKE MUCH SENSE IF ANY
ya punches cant see me, binoculars the only way u reaching WEAK PUNCH
if we had shared some tight versus, i'll have the week u take the (weak-end) I KNOW WHAT U ARE TRYIN TO SAY,BUT IT DIDNT COME OUT RIGHT
ya bars are so weak they can not attract an alcoholic ITS PRETTY GOOD...
its a freestyle not written so give me your writing hand
as i compress every bar into lines, then i'll make em'to strands JUST PLAIN GAY
i will devour, your desire to accomplish my rhymes for hours
even if i supplied u with enough bars to build constructive towers PRETTY GOOD
AIGHT...HERE IT IS...BOTH UR PUNCHES SUCKED...CLASSIC HAD 2 BARS I LIKED,ACCOMPLISHMENT HAD 1 BAR...CLASSIC HAD BETTER VOCAB N FLOW...BUT U WERE TRYIN WAYYYY TOO HARD TO COME UP WITH MULTIES,TO THE POINT WHERE THEY WERE RHYMIN BUT DIDNT MAKE SENSE A LOT OF THE TIME....ACCOMPLISHMENT,U TRIED FOR PUNCHES,BUT UR VOCAB WAS WEAK,U HAD PRETTY MUCH NO MULTIES AND BASICALLY BASICALLY BASED ON THE GOOD LINES N THE BETTER FLOW N MULTIES I'LL HAVE TO GIVE IT TO CLASSIC...
VOTE = CLASSIC...
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