triple:...okay i'll give u nice structure and a nice flow and it was pretty simple...u need to up your vocab alot punchlines werent hittin at all. im sorry man but u need to elevate it takes time and practice

dj: nice but seen better ....pretty good for ten minutes. better structure and flow..vocab was better plus punch lines....overall u were better..u mercked him
v/dj

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