demize: structure was good....vocab on an aight level, but your punchline were not hittin...i think u need to elevate slight a bit...but i see potential

gunfam: structure was a little off. vocab was poor too. but u flowed a lot better demize flow seemed slow and boring ....and even though yours was short i got to say that your punchlines is what carried u to probably when this battle.

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