LE... i say yes...

i was feelin that verse from u against proof...

"A'ight battle...Vital...pretty nice verse...you had some shit in there that was good, and some shit that wasn't great...structure was off...flow's a'ight...nice shit all around. Sinnister...well...I dunno how you got accepted into Class sic...cause that shit was pretty wack. I think you could do better, and you lacking punches and flow in this battle, were your downfall. Don't hold back dawg. Some of these herbs can surprise you."

thanks for that critique btw... but this line caught me...
"Some of these herbs can surprise you." ... that wasnt directed at me i hope.

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34 WiNS, 8 LoSSeS, 28 Ko'S

"I'll leave u lost in your own world, makin u crazy..
Leave ya ass trapped ina tire like the "Michellin Baby".. - VitaL
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