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Old 03-29-04, 08:02 AM   #1
VitaL
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[PROOF]
Open: 5/10 Ok... nothin special
Close: 4/10 Weak...
Personals: 5/10 Weak...
Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 You had sum goin on... not bad.
Punches: 5/10 Dint have enough... goes hand in hand with personals...
Multis: 5/10 Both had same amount...
Lines That Stuck Out:
"if we lived closer, id make you feel my full effect
but im only 14, and im not walkin to quebec"

Overall: wasnt really feelin this verse... u got potential tho... 29/60 Ouch...

[LIMITED EDITION]
Open: 6/10 Nice... Felt it.
Close: 4/10 On the weak side...
Personals: 6/10 High School Shootin line was nice...
Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 not bad, not nice
Punches: 6/10 Felt it...
Multis: 5/10 Didnt have alot...
Lines That Stuck Out:
"Fuck you for hatin', I'd merk your ass from Edmonton to Montreal"
"Only thing you got close to street is a high school shootin'"

Overall: Felt ya verse KiKo... jus work on ya closers... 33/60

My Vote - Limited Edition
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