big maze and cubed your stuff was too stretched
big maze, good line "If you was in the hospital and I was the green line that kept you alive/
I would suddenly go flat and laugh at your ass while you die
but stretch and shoulda been set up as a meta, u sound to new doin it like this.

cubed: u had more punches and wordplay, but stretched and not all that cool, both of ya'll need to put in multies and shorten up your lines. us like or as when doin similies(meta's) make it flow some. peace get at my battles like crazy tell me what u think

vote: cubed, more punches and actual wordplay or close.

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