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Old 03-29-04, 05:30 PM   #17
DeVaZtAtE MinDz
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From: J-Ville
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Red.... W Thee F were you thinking?? That sounds like a 3-6 mafia song or something... ok your verse had like no metaphor no punches nothing that stood out it just..... flowed.

Ok LI...ya verse was iight, you had some pretty decent lines and vocabulary...and you actually added structure to ya bars, so i could read tha shyt. Of course you didnt need much to take this one as far as i can see. No hatin Red its just an obvious one here.

winner LI
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