atlas the vagabond
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IP:
First of all, as always props to both battlers, this was quite entertaining. Tactiturn lacked decent punches, and whatever form of battle it is in life, be it the boxing ring, the battle club, or a Jerry Springer Stage, that is something that will hurt you. Tactiturn seems amateur-ish at best, so I can't clown him at all. He just lacks the talent needed right now to overcome a veteran. But best of luck to you.
Enygma....Wow, that was a nice verse. You established a flow and structure to your verse which your opponent. I was waiting for some illness from the next battler after i read Tactiturns verse, and you didn't dissappoint. Although it would've been great if you had a better opening two lines. But i read on, and was satisfied for what took place on the oncoming lines.
Taciturn you should Act Concerned, dawg, I'm known for Smackin Herbs//
Quick to give him Acid Burns, Probably still on his parent's Tax Returns/
nice on both flow and the line. I rarely ever chuckle to myself while reading these things nowadays, and that put a smile on my face.
So my vote goes to Enygma, who overall, muscled Tactiturn.
good luck to both of you.
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