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Old 03-29-04, 09:19 PM   #4
Afterword
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yo red dogg got this one
dogg it wasnt yo hottest shyt ive seen, but it was sufficient enuf to get this chump
u didnt even go at him to much, but good wrk

platinum thug u need 2 step it up, that was lame
get creative yur rhyme scheme was way to simple, and the vocab was elementry

peace
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