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Old 03-29-04, 10:32 PM   #16
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yawn
 
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Ok lets get this straight. Young is a girl. But heres my vote.

Jmob- you had a lot of content, but was still a weak verse. You punches were played out and not effective at all. It had a pretty decent flow, and alright structure, some played but shaky metas. No vocab or personals.

Young- You came with a decent structure, some iight flow and some ok punches. It was not all that good though. You have to work on getting metas in there along with some personals. I see how ya tried to get at his name, but it didnt really work. You had and alright flow.

Ok, this was a close yet wack battle. I would have to say you tied in every aspect you could, but you both didnt have vocab. Youngstar* came with weak but the only personals. So i have to give this to Young for having personals. Elevate both ya'll, Good newbie battle.

V/ YoungStar*
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