A'ight...
Disasterpiece...you had some nice muties, but I didn't feel ya punches...they were played out somewhat, and in some lines, there wasn' even a diss...structure was a lil' bit off, which made the flow waver a bit...decent verse though...elevate...
5/10
Kingz...I felt ya punches dawg...the shit wit Lil' Kim was hot...and the obese line was tite too...your structure is tite (I use the same thing) and it flows nice...some punches were a lil' weak...the "bitch please" line was the main one, other than the deficiency line...overall nice verse...
7/10
Kingz...you forgot to poll...
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