props to both battlers, to begin with.

Red dogg, as i can see you are an amateur, not only as a ''Net-cee'' but as a lyricist, so you have work to do. First of all you didn't establish a direct diss to your opponent. So as always that's points off. A battle is just that. a battle. You have to battle HIM. However you did have a decent flow and rhyme structure. You might wanna put these---->// at the end of each line so we know where you're rhyming.

Limited, i can see that you did a minimal effort because you knew it wouldn't take much to beat him. I've done the same thing several times. You're format is usually used by people with ridiculously ill lines. so i was a bit thrown off when it was a mediocre verse. But it was enough to beat him simply because you dissed him directly.

So Limited gets my vote

check this battle out, vote.

Maku JaiiLiin vs. DisasterPiece420