as always, Props to both Battlers, y'all did ya thing and what have you. So I'll serve you the verdict.
Lucky 1, you came through with a verse of mediocrity at best. It is all about the opener y'all. Or a classic metaphor. Lucky had me thinking his opener would be golden, then the second line threw me off. And i spent the rest of his verse Like i'm a dirty diseased bitch tryna kiss a playa, I kept gettin thrown off. But i think it's more lack of experience, than talent. So i have no harsh words for you. I only have harsh words for people with 200+ posts using ghostwrittens from Dr. Seuss. lol.
Truth, you came through a lot harder on your diss i think. You established a decent opener. You had me for a minute, took me for a ride, with the attitude of a freight train ride, but the lyrical punch of a bus ride. It was decent though. The right state of mind line was nice. as well as a decent flow.
The Truth gets my vote
help ya boy out and check this battle out
Maku JaiiLiin vs. DisasterPiece420