First of all Props to both battlers for a nice match up. Lemme serve you the verdict. here we go.

DisasterPiece-You seemed to be lacking direct hits. And direct hits are integral to a battle. They were more like Shotgun shots from a distance, thier so broad it's bound to hit him and tear a chunk out of him. The save your bullshit shit kingz, the group is dead on its back line was nice though. I like the heart in that line. But a sniper will definately off you. It's all about the direct diss with precision and...

Kingz-had this. Kingz, i've said this because it seems to be happening a lot. One person either doesn't directly diss or barely does and the other directly disses. Plus i sense that you slowed down on her. But i'd watch out for something like that in a round two situation or a rematch, because in our battle she spit nicely. But you easily got the edge over her on this one though. A nice opener, and that's what its about. Keep my attention, keep me interested, you did that. The format you used makes one better analyze your lines, so that in itself is good. and the last two lines?! Very nice, very nice.

so Kingz gets my vote on this one. Props to both battlers.

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Maku JaiiLiin vs. DisasterPeice420