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Old 03-30-04, 02:13 PM   #18
Kingz
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hot battle ya'll. phreak ya verse was hot, very hot.
baller i liked ya structure dog, keep doin wat ya doin but try and improve on metaphors and punches.

phreak i was feelin' ya verse but ya structure was kinda of hard to feel. it wud be better if ya started a new line for each line

vote - phreak

hit these battles pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117485
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127
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