im give this to cube- good wordplay - a nice first effort. U need to shorten ya libes and get str8 to the point. otherwise it gets borin and doesnt flow

maze's verse was stretched too but he lack the wordplay that cude had

vote cube

hit these battles pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117485
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

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