IIght look...heres my vote post

black out- You had some pretty nice combos of metaphorical usage and lyricism. It was a novice post. You had decent punches.. it obviously came forth as a solid post, in my opinion.

micwrecker- Your structure needs some work. Ive seen worse but your vocabulary , metz and punches were all basic issued up against black-outs. No hating its just an analyzatin
vote=black out

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