Anomaly-- your verses were empty all your rymes were down to the basics
you could of tried to be more creative you used too much of the same pattern
start dropping more effective Punches
Ex: "Dis da Anomaly
Rippin up da rap games anatomy
Niggaz step forward an git a verbal lobotomy
I be bombin ye like da US did Iraq
U may be able 2 hit hard but like Ja rule I Clap Bac"

though it was all good...4/10

Lil Rip your rap was alot stronger your ending in fact was very clever
but you wont get my vote because this is Rap Battles not write a good poem
you didn't battle him you only had one punch right at the end and that is not enough

OK fine you also called him a rookie(Big Deal)2/10

Vote goes 4--anomaly