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...i'm da nicest...
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BEST-IN-JEST, even if I jot my 'notes high' like TREBLE-CLEFS/
i know i asked u to clarify this line,but i wasnt feelin it
And my 'talk shows skills' like murdering OPRAH-WINFREY (talk shows kills
i know what u was tryna say,but...i think it was weak wordplay
So I'll put 'metal to your chest' like a fuckin PACEMAKER/
i liked this
Have your body parts 'stuck all over the board' like POST-IT-NOTES!/
i liked this too
I'm the BEST-EMCEE, and 'you ain't fuckin with it' like VASECTOMIES!/
i know i've seen this before
And Gambino's like Phone Sex... kid, you'll 'NEVER-CUM-CLOSE-TO-ME'
i liked this
Fight me? Kid I'm the 'best in the ring' like a PERFECT-MARRIAGE! (think)/
this isnt really a good meta...i get it,but...
Coz your rhymes ain't makin sense like having VIRGIN-PARENTS/
nice line
but..most of ur punches i've seen before,at least the concept
n i think u were tryna emphasize ur multies wayyyy too much
ur flow was fell off a lot,n u shouldnt use all those dashes
gambino
cause you couldn' beat me if I was peewee herman and you was my RIGHT HAND//
he's been beat so many times he should start to carry around LOTION//
these are prolly ur best punches,but the concept is played
and here's some advice....u should't put 2 lines with the same content side by side at least spread it out
n that chicken of the sea line...BOOOOOOOO
aight,i mean,gambino tried to be more original...but those lines sucked..he had better flow,but no multies...poetic had better punches,but concepts were played on most of them,n multies were forced n the flow fell off here n there,but over all it was better
so vote=poetic
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