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Old 03-30-04, 10:29 PM   #14
Afterword
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yo both verses were koo
gud punches, gud wordplay, gud personals
but i felt like yungstar fell off a lil at the end
and it started to sound repetetive, maybe due to lack of diverse vocab
anyway havoc came smooth and consisitant so he gets my vote
peace
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