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Old 03-31-04, 02:41 AM   #13
Afterword
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step up yo vocab lucky, or u gon need just that.
a lot of luck tryin to get a victory roun here
worst line:
"I fried you, serve ya like pommes frites at McDonalds, only I do it for free"


truth u couldve came harder, but it was a decent roast
i like the word play and multies, but try to tighten them up a lil more
they were average, use more creativity to be more affective
vote=truth, overall gyd shyt
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