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Old 03-31-04, 10:15 AM   #8
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for triple_n:

flow: it was there but fell off in spots through out the middle you got to tighten that up but this was alright 6/10

volcab:good use nothing real special but 6/10

punches:good job of hittin at a personal level you hurt him with some of these lines like,"Im a call u "scott's cause your soft and white"/" that was funny shit good job 9/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for baronmynd:

flow:straight forward and never off point good job 7/10

volcabretty basic nothing special 6/10

punches:nice personals for the most part my fav,"how many relationships u had that DIDN’T involve a keyboard?" not a bad job addressing him from start to finish 7/10

overall:20/30 good verse

vote--close battle both swinging to hurt it's like you guys know each other with how personal you got good job but triple_n gets my vote
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