This shit is close.
Acclomplishment - Pros -Good meta4's, multies
Clever verse,
good opener and finisher
Cons - It didn't flow well
It seemed like separate section joined together
After - Pros - Good vocab
Good flow
Good links between punches
Cons - Puches weren't hitting hard as your opponant
They weren't as clever, multies not as good
Verdict - Afters sounded better to read but i've got to give it to accomplishment clearly for the clever punches.
Repay the favour. we all need votes.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117125