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Old 03-31-04, 03:14 PM   #15
Sean.C
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yo good battle
flow-dp
structure-dp
punches-dp
vocab-dp
over all dp yo shit was easyer to read and funny
lil you got some good rymes but use the same word over and over again use bars makin it so that its easyer to read your stuff good battle
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