not bad son, had some alrite meaning behind it
structure wise: coulda have been set out better
multis, complexity wise: no multis, quite basic rhyme scheme
OVerall: i suggest u try to drop sumtin with a little more depth man...more complex rhymes...try structure your verse better as well
keep droppin and elevate son
peace

cud u check out ma drop
If i die 2nite

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