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Old 04-01-04, 08:21 AM   #7
LaTiNKiTTeN
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aight,afterword...this was prolly the best part of ur verse
"Yo here I am, the accomplice to yur malicious murder
So reminisce on yur accomplishments b/c yur career is over"

but,its not very creative i mean im sure its been used before

accomplish

this was prolly ur best line
dumb shit runnin at me wit a match cuz i told him to bring-da-heat-to-me.../

afterword didnt have any punches in my opinion,the bar i quoted was his strongest...there was some flow in ur verse but i wasnt feelin it that much...
accomplish...it wasnt anything spectacular...but at least u attempted some punches...u tried a lil too hard for multies,u shouldnt have to put dashes..flow fell off a bit here n there...but due to lack of punches in afterword's verse,imma have to give it to accomplish
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