i changed my title !!
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breakdown for gambino:
flow:nice job you really stepped it up from last week 7/10
volcab:solid use here too really this was a great verse 7/10
punches:nice personals some played topics like the enron line i've seen shit like that on other sites but my fav,"cause i got more tight shit in my rhymes than a whole store of SPANDEX//" funny shit. good job 7/10
overall:21/30 well rounded verse you've improved from last week
breakdown for restricted:
flow:nice use of mutlis through out the peice some of the bars got huge so without those mutlis this flow would of been wack alright though 7/10
volcab:nice best i've read in the league this week 9/10
punches:with the exception of the first bar rhyming bout yourself which i always thought was a battle no no, good job my fav,"Must Be Jackin With Glue The Way You Stuck To Yourself, Thinkin Your Hardshit, Couldnt Blow Dust Off A Shelf/" i'm not sure bout the feeding off his verse you said and he said it's alright so anyway best line 8/10
overall:24/30 flow,volcab punches it was all on this week
vote--restricted close the multis and volcab use really what pulled him into the lead
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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