wow i see the problem with newbies voting they still dont understand alot of the concepts involved here anyways here i go....baron the first line was kinda streched but then you brought it back and came witha nice multis nice flow and some nice personals
triple you had ok flow not a real broad vocab and your structure was ok you need to step up some more if your in this league cause there are alot of cats that spit sick shit so just elevate

v-baron

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