....iight the lyrics were alright...but the BEAT WAS CRAZY...SOLETERNITY?
youngbuck did a song to that beat...it sucked but thats info for you

you need to work on ya voice and pronunciation and flow...you just liek whatever on the track....um...work on puttin emotion into that...you just like EH and thats it you need to put some attitude into that...flow will come with that!

keep em comin and work on it

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