^^^^ it was suppose to be a topical don't you read the fucking rules??? shit i don't know i guess this might be my fault. i won't dq shit since you both showed and both didn't use the topic i guess this battle goes on by it's only for regular points now
breakdown for 2 time:
flow
retty good nothing special but overall 7/10
volcab:kinda basic but got the job done 6/10
punches:best line,"cuz this fairie light in the loafers flyin high like peter pan" kinda played but most of your punches were not bad though 6/10
overall:19/30 pretty good verse considering it was suppose to be a topical
breakdown for lyrical mc:
flow:alright kinda average but 6/10
volcab
retty good pretty then your oppenent 7/10
punches:best line,"Hip Hop carrer fadin' as if it were a pencil mark," nice and i havn't heard too much like it aside from that it was kinda weak but 7/10
overall:20/30 solid verse
vote--lryical mc better punches and volcab edged it out here