i changed my title !!
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IP:
cool you guys followed the rules i'm voting
breakdown for the truth:
flow:good job using the words and keeping an alright flow 7/10
volcab:solid use through out it not overly complex but good 6/10
punches:not much here but best line," i ENHANCED in a better way of living/everybody eaten treat everyday like thanksgiving/" alright considering the words you had to use 6/10
overall:19/30 good verse
breakdown for service:
flow:nice nothing special though 7/10
volcab:good use hear better then your oppenent some of the best in the league so far that i've read 8/10
punches:best line,"but youve already fell off worse than gymnists with bad balance" you threw more of them and they hurt 8/10
overall:23/30 nice punches and mechanics a well rounded verse
vote--service ran away with this and his punches
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
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