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Old 04-01-04, 10:39 PM   #6
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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cool you guys followed the rules i'm voting

breakdown for the truth:

flow:good job using the words and keeping an alright flow 7/10

volcab:solid use through out it not overly complex but good 6/10

punches:not much here but best line," i ENHANCED in a better way of living/everybody eaten treat everyday like thanksgiving/" alright considering the words you had to use 6/10

overall:19/30 good verse

breakdown for service:

flow:nice nothing special though 7/10

volcab:good use hear better then your oppenent some of the best in the league so far that i've read 8/10

punches:best line,"but youve already fell off worse than gymnists with bad balance" you threw more of them and they hurt 8/10

overall:23/30 nice punches and mechanics a well rounded verse

vote--service ran away with this and his punches
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