disaster piece: okay ya verse was aight but i seen better from u. you were lacking in punchlines, but vocab was aight and the structure was okay. but it was a good verse
gunfam: i thought u were goin to take it after i read disaster's verse. but your punchline werent hittin, u lacked vocab, but ur structure was good. elevate with stronger punchlines and u should be good.

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