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Old 04-02-04, 01:38 AM   #11
Afterword
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atticus u had the aggression but not the skill tighten it up,
regulator easy victory for u my only criticizm is:
y u always explain yo punches? their no need, most of them are self explainitory, and for the lames that dont get it, thats on them
and if u tighten up ur transitions between bars, u would be fuckin even tuffer to beat.
just keepin it real, no hating here
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