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Old 04-02-04, 09:18 AM   #8
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[ Regulator™]
Open: 6/10 See Comments…
Close: 7/10 Stronger Closer…
Personals: 7/10 Taliban line was nice…
Metas/Wordplay: 9/10 You Had Nicer Form on the 2nd half…
Punches: 8/10 Came Out Swingin...
Multis: 9/10 Kept Em Comin..
Lines That Stuck Out:
" You get Dunked And Power Slammed..Cuz ReG "Drops A.K." harder than a 'Clumsy Taliban' (His Name AkA)"
“Suffer Blows-To-Necks, Reg's "Takin Aretha Franklin Albums" to leave you kids with "No-Respect"”

Comments: Opener would have been nicer if “if this Punk Gets "Outta Hand"” was removed… or re-written.

Overall: Felt Most Ya Verse … 46/60 Nicely Done...

[ A.K.A.]
Open: 5/10 Not Feelin It… Didn’t Come Off Hard…
Close: 5/10 On The Weak Side, Wasn’t Great...
Personals: 4/10 Didn’t Have Many…
Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 Ehhh…
Punches: 5/10 Didn’t Come That Hard…
Multis: 3/10 Didnt Have Any…
Lines That Stuck Out:
"i hope that 15 lines ain't to much for you to think of”
“your icon is wolraven (spelled wrong sorry) cause you enjoy men in tights”

Comments: Complexity With A Flow Is A Good Thing To Have… Keep Elevating

Overall: No Hate… I Always Judge Fair n Try To Help 27/60

My Vote - Regulator

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