AIGHT...

Here it is... I can tell you proabley are alittle new to the game, but you show great signs of potential. Your flow in this piece was on point, and you made sense, (which, lol, is always good)

Some things I would do... Is try to elevate your vocabulary and post some more shit that is longer, so we can see what you have to offer... IT WAS GOOD, but just keep elevating, and you can talk to me if you need any help on anything, i'm here... but a good start, keep elevating and doing you...

PLEASE... return the favor and peep the Hall Of Fame Collaboration in the open mic, thanks mayne... peace

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