Heres the lowdown Lil Rip the line about "watch you put lipstick on your head to make up your mind" come on dawg you got it off the jokes page on the internet cause I read it online one day.As far as the rest of your verse you need to just keep working on your punches I can tell you'll get better. Now for The Truth I like the way you came, you had nice punches, nice bar structure, and a good flow. You came hard but I can tell you capable of coming harder. But in the end my vote:THE TRUTH